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As a matter of fact students attend classes 6 hours each day. Not only they wake up really early but most of them usually arrive home extremely tired as well, due to the effort they make during the day as they need to be focused on their lessons. It is important for them to rest in order to concentrate even better. In addition they should practise sport in their spare time in order to get fit and relax after a harsh working day. Last but not least important children have the right to play and interact with friends so that they can build and reinforce their personalities, School day should not be longer owing to the fact that children need to rest, do some sport and play to relax.

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